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Friday, August 21, 2009

Looking up and around

I look up and around,
A fresh breeze blows within.
An occasional smile.
The aroma of fresh filter coffee -
I get going.

I look up and around,
A swarm of bees flying around.
I search for the INVISIBLE hot-air vent
But in vain.
I keep going.

I look up and around,
Its definitely time for a break.
I signal for some time,
But I know.
I will have to go.

I look up and around,
They don't want to frighten you.
But, their look does.
Don't have a choice,
I better keep going.

I look up and around,
The steam engine at its peak.
Calm faces of the cuter sex,
Work better than the chillers.
I know I have to keep going.

I look up and around,
Known faces beaming at me.
Meaningless blink of the eyes,
They seem to keep going.
I try to keep going.

I look up and around,
The back of my head exercising.
Hunt for freshness starts,
I know it doesn't exist.
But, I have to keep going.

I look up and around,
Few called it a day.
Few laze around.
Few stay put.
I force myself to keep going.

I look up and around,
There are definite echos.
Yet I'm still here.
I'm not lonely.
No other go, have to keep going.

I look up and around,
Feel the souls resting.
Spot-lights on the rest,
I work a smile on my lips.
I keep going.

PS: Dedicated to all those I ditched this weekend. Sorry guys! I have to keep going.

8 Expressions:

$ph!nX said...

Cuter sex..nice touch da..sweet :)

VJ said...

hey.. was thinking the same thing that Sphinx said.
:P

Nice ra. And you say you cant write poetry :)

And im sure people will understand that you have been busy

Chiju said...

@Sphinx..
:)
@VJ
of course they'll! :)

Vivek said...

When I look up and around,
I'm in big trouble!
:D

Vibushan Lakshminarayan said...

thambi?? unakkulla ipdi oru jandhu a?? (sivaji style) :D
superb man :) nice way of madakkifying our anger :P

Chiju said...

@Vivek
Always my friend!
@Vibushan
hehehe
Anger madakkifying success eh appo???

Navneeth R said...

Nice and sweet ..

Bhuvana said...

cute poem chiju:) keep it up!!

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